hear me out
look, i see where you're headed.. it looks promising, to an extent. this animation lacked in many more ways than one. first off, the characters just stood there, the little "speak" icon was out of sync, the objects just sorta.. floated..... and.. clock movies are overdone. but i didn't penalize in the last part. the idea's a little shaky, but you can improve.
what you need is jolts. different shots, camera angles and such. that's what makes a flash entertaining.
could've had a preloader and a replay button, and it would have been set.. other than that.... wow, a clock movie with a plot! well, nothing too new or interesting animation-wise.. all the characters are pretty much ripped... but i like the addition of chat clock.
overall, not bad.. in fact, i like it.
p.s. oh and you may want to try personalizing the animation style if you're making a series, to suit you as an individual.. just a suggestion.. don't be afraid to break the cycle.
this was a decent animation, good enough to be kept.. though i think you should have a play button of some sort and a pre-loader. anyhow, the small file size was good for quick viewing. keep up the good work, oh and i also experienced the sound problem when i replayed it.
Yeah i don't know how to fix it its strange, maybe someone in forums could help
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